Dear Yisus,
Thank you for your application.
Unfortunately it has been denied for posting for the following reason: This isn't the right way to present yourself. You've not wrote about yourself and in that case we won't get to know who you are and what are your concerns. You've to tell us more about you. Also it appears you've got weak communication skills which lead to the denial of your application.
Try to improve yourself and maybe apply again over a few weeks.
Thank you for your interest for the Vice Underdogs Clan,
- Vice Underdogs Recruitment Team.