I believe that you have potential, and that you can turn out to be a very good player. You have three things which you need to work on, and they are also the reason for your denial. Firstly, your English language, speak proper English ingame to convince people that your English did improve, and you can improve more by hanging out with fluent English speakers, focus on your English classes, or watch tutorials on the internet, people don't believe that your English has improved, prove it to them. Secondly, your attitude, some of members seem to be complaining about your attitude, you need to fix that, try ignoring if someone abuses you, and repa him ingame instead, you will indeed love the feeling, trust me. Thirdly, meet more VUs, some VUs aren't familiar with you, try finding them around VCMP, and play with them, so they could get to know you alot better, and are able to cast a proper vote. 6 voted positively, and 19 voted negatively.
Denied, hoping to see a changed you next time, remember if you are accepted karan leaves VCMP, so yeah work hard.
Good luck!